Friday, July 22, 2016

Star Wars Favorites

Movies:

1) Empire Strikes Back
2) Return of the Jedi
3) Star Wars: A New Hope
...
500) The Phantom Menace
501) Revenge of the Sith
...
1000) Attack of the Clones

Authors:

1) Timothy Zahn / Michael A. Stackpole*
2) ... hm... going to have to think about this...

* I like Zahn slightly more than Stackpole, but they truly are that close.

Books:

- Heir to the Empire / Dark Force Rising / The Last Command
- Outbound Flight / Survivor's Quest
- X-Wing: Rogue Squadron / Wedge's Gamble
- I, Jedi
- Specter of the Past / Vision of the Future
- Allegiance / Choices of One
- Jedi Apprentice: The Rising Force / The Captive Temple

Characters:

Top Tier:
- Corran Horn
- Mara Jade
- Luke Skywalker
- Obi-Wan Kenobi
- Wedge Antillies
- Revan
- Hal Horn

Second Tier:
- Han Solo
- Qui-Gon Jinn
- Talon Karrde

New Jedi Order Beginnings

The following quote summarizes, quite well, the problem I've always had with the NJO series (and those after it).

James Luceno: "Early on, though, the NJO wasn't intended to incorporate a great deal of Bantam continuity. We didn't want to alienate (so to speak) a new generation of Expanded Universe readers. This certainly was the case in Bob Salvatore's Vector Prime, and to some extend in Mike Stackpole's duology. But by the time I was writing Agents of Chaos, Del Rey was receiving emails and letter form fans imploring us not to abandon the Bantam continuity. The hard-core readership wanted one story - and we've done our best to give it to them. Given the wealth of background material, writing a Star Wars novel at this point is almost like writing a work of historical fiction!"

Monday, July 18, 2016

DisneyWars and Irony

Warning: Unpopular Opinions Expressed Herein

I've been a major Star Wars fan since the first time I was introduced to the movies when I was 11. It was love at first watch, to my family's continued chagrin. Now for me, this means 1993, when there were only 3 movies and the EU was just starting to really take off. I remember when the x-wing books were new, when Anakin's fall was still a matter of speculation, and when Luke's love life was a matter of fierce debate (Mara or Callista?), and the utter sense of triumph when he finally married Mara (like he was suppose to :P). 

That said, I largely stopped following developments (and participating in the fan-community) when NJO started. For me, what is currently going on with Disney has a lot in common with what went on back then, with the exception that they couldn't actually abandon the previous books. 

I remember hearing how NJO was plotted out beforehand, by a group of largely new authors, with little or no input from the previous group or seemingly any desire to have input. It was their vision, and their creation, and they were going to do what they wanted. And also like Disney, they "allowed" some original authors to come back and contribute, but only in certain places. To me, that led to something that never quite felt like it belonged or was proper Star Wars.

Similar comparisons can be made with the uncritical enthusiasm around the Prequels and TFA. 'Prequel hate' might be considered the norm now, but it certainly wasn't when it first came out. As someone who was never fond of the prequels, and had many long debates after watching them with other fans, it is eerily similar.

The irony is that now I have to defend a series of books that I still find deeply insulting, because regardless, they still had more respect and quality than the junk Disney has tried to feed us. Not to mention, having to explain how the prequels were in many ways better than TFA. Gah! Curse you Disney for bringing me here!!!!

Friday, October 23, 2015

The beauty of God in fiction

I’m a Christian. The very core of that means I believe, with everything I am, that God is beautiful. That everything clean and pure that I love and admire in the world is a reflection of him. Or, stated differently, anything that reflects his beauty is what *is* pure and admirable. Everything that I love is found, it is fulfilled, it is satisfied, in him.

Stories, in their own small way, have a chance to reflect the beauty of God in much the same way the world does. Everything good in a story: a beloved character, a satisfying relationship, a victory against a villain. All of these things have the potential to reflect or give a taste of the beauty of God.

I think, in a way, whenever those reflections are tainted, twisted to the world’s standards, it takes away that beauty. For those of us who see and feel it, it is like having something good and greatly desired, something longed for, violently ripped away or mutated into something ugly.

It would follow, then, that "Christian" fiction would be something that, no matter the plot or characters, would nurture that taste… create that desire and longing, rather than kill it. That isn't the same as omitting bad choices, writing just fluff, or overt Christian language, of course. It's something that shows the desirability of a good relationship between family, husbands and wives, friends. The worth of good choices even when they are hard. Hope instead of hopelessness. Things that reflect God's faithfulness, his holiness, his justice, his love.

We live surrounded by corruption, apathetic towards good. Good fiction, in my opinion, creates that thirst for what is good. C.S. Lewis was particularly gifted in this.

Friday, January 03, 2014

Boring, Extinguishing, or Frightening

As a companion to the challenge to list things that I found exciting, inspiring, or intriguing, I decided to flip things around and explore the things that I dislike, the things that leaving me uneasy and at worse destroy my enjoyment of a story.

Because this challenge is the opposite of the other, I picked three words that I thought were good opposites to the ones in the original challenge: boring instead of exciting, extinguishing instead of inspiring, and frightening instead of intriguing. If I wasn't trying to mirror the other challenge, I would probably have added "annoying" to the title.

Of the three, I consider 'extinguishing' to represent the worst of the concepts, the types of things that drain imagination and enjoyment instead of set them on fire.

THE LIST (under construction)
  • Unreasonable people
  • Illogically dense people
  • Fictional character who act out of character
  • Unrealized potential
  • Distant relationships
  • Avoidable drama
  • Uncontrolled emotions
  • Embarrassing/awkward social situations 
  • Serial killers
  • Heights/sheer drops/falling
  • Physical restriction (i.e. being stuck in an underground tunnel unable to move)
  • Crude/sexual humor
Note: There is a disclaimer on this list, that doesn't exist on the other list. Many of these things can be used effectively to make a good story, one that I enjoy, but it all depends on how they are used (with the exception of characters acting out of character, which I don't think is ever okay).

Thursday, January 02, 2014

Exciting, Inspiring, or Intriguing

There is a writing challenge I came across that encourages the writer to make a list of things they find exciting, inspiring, or intriguing. After I started thinking about it, I came to find the challenge itself intriguing. It seemed to me to be a starting point for understanding quite a lot, not only what I wanted to write about, but why I liked certain books best.

This is the first part of the challenge: a list of things that excite, inspire, or intrigue me.

THE LIST (in no particular order or categories)

  • Good vs. evil conflicts
  • Spoken words as binding and/or authoritative
  • World War II
  • Jerusalem
  • Turn of the century Egypt (early 1900s)
  • Archeology
  • Fictional 1920/30s detectives
  • Folk dancing
  • Redemption stories (related to realized potential)
  • Realized potential (related to redemption stories)
  • Apprenticeships
  • Strong friendships / complementary relationships
  • Strong parent/child relationships
  • Adoption
  • Planes / flying
  • Engineering (electrical/mechanical)
  • Mountains
  • Mountain fortresses
  • Exploration
  • Space / Nebulas / Stars
  • Swimming
  • Other cultures
  • Solving puzzles / mysteries
  • Space ships / fighters / stations
  • Rebellions against oppression
  • Weight of history
  • Hidden communities
  • Layered cities (i.e. Coruscant)
  • Secret identities
  • Being undercover
  • Shadow wars
  • Shadow antagonists
  • Autumn
  • Christmas
  • Underground / cave cities
  • Cities w/ waterfalls and/or lakes
  • Epic sword-fights / battles
  • Archery
  • Monarchies
  • Liege relationships
  • Divine providence
  • Kings as priests
  • Wild West
  • Tight knit communities
  • Holiness of God

Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Discussing movies from books


When one puts careful thought into why a book was adapted to a movie in a certain way, and then voices a complaint, receiving a response of "movies aren't books, you have to change things" really is kind of infuriating. Really? I had no idea. Try thinking about it and asking why a person thinks something before you shoot their idea down as irrelevant. You might be surprised. 

Also, reacting to people who praise what was changed with "it wasn't that way in the book" can be equally annoying. Sometimes things really were better and the people praising it don't know or care, but sometimes they have put a lot of thought into it as well. Never assume, always question and listen first. You might learn something.

Of course this applies to most conversations, not just movie discussions :)

Saturday, November 03, 2012

NaNoWriMo '12 and Star Wars


If I'm going to participate in NaNoWriMo this year, I've got to stop thinking about Star Wars. It's throwing me off... but first...

I categorize the Star Wars Expanded Universe in 3 ways...

(1) The truly great. This category belongs only to Zahn and Stackpole for their outstanding stories and their firm understanding of the universe and the existing characters.

(2) The "okay". Things like Shadows of the Empire, The Jedi Apprentice books, and such go here. These are okay stories and their understanding of the universe and characters is passable, but perhaps not perfect. Maybe 20% of the stories fit in this category.

(3) The utterly horrific rubbish. This category is for the New Jedi Order, Legacy of the Force, and so on books. They might be perfectly good stories, but 9 times out of 10 the authors are writing 'sci-fi' not Star Wars. They don't get the characters or the universe, nor does it seem many of them really care to. Probably 70% of the EU stories belong here.

And the prevalence of #3 is why I'm not thrilled about Disney's plans.

(I should note my problem with the prequels is actually different from the above. While they are rubbish, they are still Star Wars.)

Maybe writing this out will help me focus on air pirates....

Friday, September 07, 2012

SC FICTION: The Fall of the West


SUMMARY: An account of the Shadow King and the fall of the western kingdom as a storyteller might tell it.


History is made by people, the threads of their lives weaving together to form a tapestry either beautiful or terrifying. The king of the west added a dark thread to the picture; he is the enemy. The kings of the northern, middle, and southern kingdoms stood against him; they are our heroes… for the most part. But in particular, our story follows the thread of one man’s life; a life that would change the course of a war and bring peace after so many years of terror when no others could.

When our hero was still but a small child, the King of the West began to build up his forces. He conscripted young men, women even, from every household in every town and village; through force and through terror he brought them into his fold and trained them to fight.  In twos, tens, hundreds, thousands he sent them to the edges of their land, to their neighbors, and made war with his enemies, hoping to expand and gather more power to himself. But to his great rage, his enemies fought back with the ferocity of those defending their homes. Time and time again his forces were pushed back, but still he did not give up his plans.

Pulling his forces back and feigning defeat, the king sat it his tower by the sea and he plotted. He sent out spies into all corners of the land with one simple instruction; to find for him the one thing his enemies loved most. One by one they went and came back with their news.

The King of the North, they said, took great pride in his young son and heir, having several daughters before his son was born. Unlike the Midlands, the South, and the East, you see, they didn’t allow female succession.

The King of the Midlands was not yet married, being young yet, and loved mostly himself, taking great pride in his stamina and skill as a warrior.

The King of the South greatly loved his wife and young son.

Having failed to win his war by force, the King of the West choose to continue his war with terror, and chip away at the will and confidence of his enemies by threatening or destroying those things that were most held dear.

To the north and to the south he sent skilled thieves and assassins. To them was given the order to kill the Heir to the North and South, and to kill the Southern kings beloved wife. To the Midlands he sit another kind of assassin, not with orders to kill but to disable.

Without warning they came upon their targets, and no guards were able to stop them.

While walking through his gardens one day, the King of the Midlands was attacked. The assassin was killed by the king’s guards,  but not before irreparably destroying the Kings leg and arm. From that point forward, the King of the Midlands was skilled no more, not even able to walk without help.

While riding through the woods with his guard, as was his custom, the Heir to the North and his guard were killed by arrow. They were found later that day to the great grief of the king.

While traveling home from the eastern most portion of their land, the Queen of the South and her young son, then just five years of age, were set upon by a group of armed men. Through great skill and cunning, the agents of the west separated the queen from her protectors and they killed her.

But now is where are story starts to change, for in the confusion, the agents of the west lost sight of the young prince and were not able to find him before being driven back by his protectors.

For hours the guards searched for their prince, nearly giving up in despair, when finally they found him curled up near the body of his mother. Carefully picking their charge up, they brought him and the body of their Queen home.

The enemies of the west mourned their losses, and in the south, a young boy lit the flame of his mother’s pyre and tried to be brave. This young boy is the hero of our story. His name was Emrus.

The king of the south, Emrus’ father, was a shrewd warrior, and while his grief at the death of his wife was great, it did not dull his judgement.

Discerning the strategy of the King of the West, he sent his son and heir away, into hiding, where no man could find him save the king himself. So sending his son to safety, he turned his focus of doing battle with the King of the West.

For twelve long years the King of the South lead the charge against the King of the West, with neither making much headway against the other.

All the while, young Emrus was hidden away, growing up in secret… or was he?

Unbeknownst to even his closest advisors, when the boy had grown some and was no longer immediately recognizable, the King of the South brought his son home. Emrus and his caretakers were given positions as palace servants; Emrus took a position in the stables, where his father visited him regularly, and the two grew very close.

Now Emrus looked nothing like his father, which aided their charade greatly. No one looking at the stocky blond haired king would suspect the slight brown haired youth to be his son.

As time passed, Emrus gained more and more authority as a palace servant, until eventually he was given the position as their king’s squire; being taught and trained by the king himself for battle. All the while the king maintained the ruse that his son was still hidden away, even taking time now and then to visit him. All the while Emrus stayed at the palace and cemented his position as a servant in the minds of the people.

History does not tell us how many actually suspected, but it does indicate their illusion was quite strong, deceiving many of the kings closest advisors.

On and on this went until Emrus was 17 years of age, and had begun to grow strong both as a warrior and as a leader; having no lack of practice thanks to the King of the West.

Now the King of the West had learned much from his initial campaign, and had not yet tried such a thing again. Instead he continued his new campaign of terror against the kingdom. Small groups of highly trained men would attack outposts deep within enemy territory. Important officials and their families would be found dead within their homes. Soldiers prowled the borders, killing anyone who wandered into their range that didn’t belong; sometimes even their own people fell victim. Towns and villages near the border, such as this one here, dealt with raids in the middle of the night.

There were no great battles in this war, no great victories or defeats to point to, only slow destruction and terror that penetrated into the very hearts of the kingdoms.

The King of the West had learned his lesson indeed. Some say that the warlords learned their craft from him.

Now, every so often the King of the South would go to the border lands and assess the situation, provide support, and encourage the beleaguered villagers who refused to live anywhere else. After all, it was their home, was it not?

The King of the West came to understand that nothing he did caused the resolve of the South to falter. 

So when the days came for the King of the South to tour the borderlands, he sent his best men and assassins to do battle with the forces of the south.

The battle was fierce and without parallel in all the long 12 years of the war, and in the end the forces of the south were able to beat back the forces of the north but not before their king was gravely injured; far to injured to survive.

In a tent at the edge of the battle zone, the King of the South took his most trusted advisor in one hand, and his beloved squire in the other, and made known the secret they had worked so hard to keep. And so, revealing his son, the King of the South died.

Through their grief, Emrus and the king’s advisor devised a plan. The King of the West was a formidable enemy, even though they had defended their borders against him, and he had shown himself relentless in his goals. Instead of throwing away all the work that had gone into keeping Emrus hidden, they determined to use this to throw off the King of the West. Instead of ruling openly, Emrus would rule in shadow, as unknown to his subjects as he was to the King of the West.

For ten years Emrus ruled his land in secret and did battle with the King of the West, for the first time using his own tactics against him. For ten years the people of the south lived in doubt.

Emrus saw this in his people and knew time was short, for he did not lock himself away or hide in the palace, but, along with a well trusted guard, he traveled the lands, even into the western kingdom itself at times. He knew the fear, the despair, the hope, the joys, and the needs of his people perhaps better than any king before him.

In these years the kingdom was well ruled, and even despite the threat of the west, they began to rebuild and even prosper. And yet the threat was still there, the borderlands were a place of strife, and many began to doubt the very existence of their king.

Things were coming to a head, not only within the southern kingdom, but without. For nearly twenty years the King of the West had fought this battle, and while there was no waining of his determination, he was getting old and his time was running out. As this began to settle on the the old kings thoughts, his determination only strengthen to accomplish his goals and more and more he pushed towards open war for the first time in many years.

Bigger and bigger the raiding parties became, and longer the battles to stop them, until it was undeniable that they were at war. Still Emrus was not yet willing to give up his advantage.

With his trusted guard and friend, Emrus went to the governor of the borderlands, an old friend of his father’s who knew Emrus as the king’s squire, and he offered his assistance. Trained to lead, it was not long before Emrus was leading the governors forces with his blessing. Great was his ability on the battle field and he grew in renown among the people and became much loved by them; the people he had been traveling among and coming to know throughout the years.

Yet as the battles became more fierce and it became clear that soon the fate of their kingdom would hang in the balance, he saw his people’s spirit begin to wain as there was no sign of their king.

Emrus composed a message and sent it with a courier to the palace, to his chief advisor and one of the only men who knew him for who he really was. In his message was a plan, and the plan was as follows.

Before his father died, he had begun training a group of men meant to achieve similar feats inside the western kingdom as the forces of the West achieved inside the southern kingdom. After his father died, 
Emrus continue this goal, and this group of men became his own elite force; the only soldiers in the kingdom who knew their king.

Emrus called for them now, but this time not for raids against outposts, but to strike at the very heart of the west: their king. For over ten years they have been preparing for this end, and now the time had come.

While Emrus led his forces to battle at the border, supported by reinforcements from around the kingdom, his elite force would strike out at the King of the West himself. To make sure the distraction was as complete as he could make it, Emrus would fight, not as a well liked general, but as the King of the South.

Now you may have noticed that I have said nothing about the Midlands or the North, but they too were enemies of the West and had been holding their own for as long as the South.

In the over twenty years since the war began, though, neither the North or the Midlands had the ability to do much more than defend their own borders, being riddled with strife both within and without. If it had not been for the great courage of many fine men and women living near the borderlands, the King of the West might have conquered those lands, for the leadership of both the North and the Midlands was questionable at best.

It was a time of great change in both of those lands.

After the murder of the Heir to the North, the king retreated into his grief, giving more and more power to his generals and refusing all pressure to produce another heir, instead naming a distance relative, unknown to the court, as his heir. 

When the old king died and his heir came to the throne, many of the villagers, on the front lines and beyond, complained. They felt he was an interloper and didn’t belong and very few gave their support to him, or at least gave it without complaint. It wasn’t long before there was a revolt. For the next thirty or so years the land went through a succession of rulers until settling on what is actually the present line. Not that they haven’t had their share of conflicts, but mostly among themselves.

It is truly a testimony to the spirit of the people that they didn’t fall to the West in those days. The same can be said of the Midlands, for they dealt with their own power struggles after the injury of their king.

The will and strength of the Midlands king proved greater than many thought possible. While he struggled with his injuries he did not let them crush his spirit completely. Unfortunately, the same could not be said of his body. Crushed it was, and after only a year it gave up on him and the king died; still young, still unmarried, and still without an heir. The same power vacuum as in the north.

While not as bloody as the struggles of the North, the potential heirs of the south squabbled amongst themselves for years before the matter was settled. Still, even after the matter was settled, the south could do little but defend its borders, never having been one of the strongest military powers.
And so the south remained the greatest threat and greatest hope for all peoples in the battle against the west.

After conferring with his advisors and his generals, the plan was set for both the raid and the attack on the border forces of the west. And to the great delight of all his people, Emrus took up his place as king, coming out of the shadows, and led his army in full regalia.

The battle was a fierce one, the forces of both kingdoms advancing and retreating, advancing and retreating; the forces of the south drawing out the forces of the west. And when all eyes were on the battle of the borderlands, the elite forces of the south struck. Through subterfuge, diversion, and skill, they made their way into the very heart of the west, and there they struck down the King of the West, the man who have been the driving force of terror for so many years.

On the battlefield, the forces of the south dealt harsh blows to the leadership of the west, taking out some of their strongest leaders, but still the west fought on, even when word of their king’s death reached them. They fought without direction, but still they fought.

After seven long days, and great sacrifices on both sides, the forces of the south beat back what remained of the once great war machine of the west; they had achieved victory, though it would take three more long years before they could celebrate and peace returned to their lands.

In the end, the western kingdom became a protectorate of the south, though the people were now wild and unruly. Eventually the south pulled back, the land of the west becoming the wildlands of today; lawless, fractured, ever changing.

Emrus, the shadow king of the South, ruled from the shadows no longer; ruling in peace for another 41 years until his death, the rule of the kingdom passing to his firstborn son. Many knew him as Emrus the Wayfarer, for even in peace he liked to travel the roads of his kingdom, spending time with his people and hearing their tales.

And that, my friends, concludes the tale of the Fall of the West and of Emrus, the Shadow King of the South.

Sunday, April 08, 2012

Fan-Fiction Recommendations: Stargate Atlantis

Stargate atlantis has (or had, it's been awhile since I really looked) some of the highest quality fan-fiction I think I've run across in the fandoms I haunt (Stargate, Star Wars, Harry Potter, etc). Not only do the authors nail the characters, but many of their stories are both long (often novel length), well plotted, and well written. Many of these stores that I've listed are a great pleasure to read, and they represent only a fraction of what I've encountered. I only wish this could be said of the other fandoms.

Listed is a link to the author's profile on fanfiction.net, and a sample list of their stories. Again, this represents only a fraction..


Plumber's Helper
That Which is Broken
Running on Empty
Candle in the Dark
The Killing Frost
Breathe

Choosing His Team
Hidden Resources
Failure to Communicate
Sheppard Moon
Figurative Hell and Literal High Water

Bee in the Bonnet
Paradise
Misconstrued
Ancient Devices
Stupid Stuff

Wait of Water
Tokens
Sentry Duty
Bugs in the System
Fall From Grace

Reflections
Flying Lessons
You Can't Just Walk Away
The Reluctant Hero

Friday, April 06, 2012

SC FICTION: The Sea King

SUMMARY: An account of one of the old kings as a storyteller might tell it.

A long, long time ago, in the old days, there was a king. Well, in fact he was THE king, for it was back in the time when there was one king over all the land.

This king had a passion for all kinds of ships, ships that went on lakes, ships that went on rivers, but especially ships that went on the sea.

When he was but a new king, a young man, he searched far and wide, and found men willing to pack up their ships and make sail, looking for new lands and other adventures.

Of those that returned, for there were those that didn’t, most brought news of failure, finding only seemingly endless sea. Most didn’t seem surprised by this, for don’t all the old tales say so?

There was one man though, a great captain, who set sail toward the west and upon returning brought news of land, many islands, uninhabited but less than a weeks sailing time away.

The king was ecstatic and greatly desired to see these islands for himself, but his advisors, in concern for their king’s safety, spent countless hours reminding the king that his duty lie with his people, not in seeking adventure. The king gave in to their concerns, or so it seemed.

Still with desire in his heart, the king devised a plan and brought it before his advisors. For five days and nights they argued and planed and calculated until it was decided that a small group would be gathered, volunteers from all over the kingdom, and they would be sent to these islands with supplies to fulfill their needs, and they would make a home there.

If this new colony lasted but a year, more people would be sent and it would be considered a new realm for the kingdom; a realm the king could visit anytime he wished.

All this was done at the kings command, and several month later a small group, 100 men, women, and youth, set sail to make a new home for themselves.

It was not easy for the settlers, and the islands showed themselves to be a harsh new land, full of dangers the settlers never fathomed. A harsh toll was paid, with many falling ill or injured, and many who died of their afflictions. But the settlers were a nobel lot, strong and stubborn, and no hardships were going to be their defeat.

When a year had passed, the small settlement was still there, a little battered and bruised, but fighting still. And as the king had promised, he sent more settlers and more supplies, and before long the settlement was thriving again, built on top of the hard earned knowledge of the brave men and woman who came first.

The settlement became as a jewel to the king and he visited his subjects there often with great pleasure and these islanders thrived under his leadership and care.

Years past, and the king grew old and eventually he died, passing his throne to his son; a son that did not have the same love of the sea as his father.

The settlement, once loved, was abandoned as a foolish venture, left to survive on its own. Some of the islanders left, returning to the mainland, but still more stayed, refusing to abandoned the only home many of them had known and had worked so hard to build. And there they lived, while on the mainland their very existence faded from all but the most studious of memories.

Saturday, March 10, 2012

Annoying Argument


Recently I was re-watching Star Wars: A New Hope, and it got me thinking. In the many years since the prequel trilogy was released, I have heard many arguments along these lines: "You can't complain about how horrible the prequels were, the originals have their share of problems and are just as cheesy." These arguments have always annoyed me because they always feel focused on surface issues, shallow, and miss the real problem.

Underneath all of my complaints about the prequels is the belief that the very core of the prequels, the story that sits under all the special effects and all the acting (or lack thereof), has major issues while the core of the original trilogy does not (or at least on any major scale). 

It wasn't the special effects or the acting that made me love those original movies, it wasn't even that they were visual, it was, and still is, the story itself. I don't care about flashy special effects, I don't care much about cheesy ones (or else I would never love the original Doctor Who like I do…), but I do care very much about the story. And it is the story of the prequels that ultimately causes my extreme dislike of them. 

So if you are ever tempted to use that above argument on me... don't… please….

Thursday, March 01, 2012

HP FICTION: Under Her Gaze


SUMMARY: Snapshot. Remus Lupin contemplates his Hogwarts acceptance letter.
DISCLAIMER: Hogwarts, and the rest of the Wizarding World belong to J.K. Rowlings.

The boy sat quietly under the tree, his back against the trunk so he could look out into the small clearing. A soft breeze ruffled his hair, providing a hint of coolness on what would otherwise have been an unbearably hot summer day. He had been in that spot for what seemed like hours, watching only absently the comings and going of the birds and the work of the bees as they flew from flower to flower. No matter the distraction, his mind and eyes kept drifting back to the parchment he clutched in his hand, the fulfillment of a long-time dream.
He still couldn't quite believe it. For as long as he remembered he had heard about Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Both his parents were magic, that is, able to see and do magic, and had attended the school themselves. There were times, when he was younger, when they would put him to bed by telling him stories about the grand castle that housed the wizard school, of its ever changing halls, moving staircases, and even about the ghosts who lived there. He had always loved these stories, letting them fill his mind with dreams of adventures that would probably never have been allowed had he actually attended the school. Being very young, he had longed for the day when he could attend and experience everything for himself, not understanding all the hard work that would come with it.
With time and circumstances, however, all that had changed. His parents rarely ever talked about their school days around him anymore, afraid it would upset him to be reminded of what he couldn't have. A place in Hogwarts would never be given to a monster like him. His parents had tried of course. They had pleaded and begged and tried every remedy available to them until they could afford it no longer. He had been poked, prodded, and forced to drink foul potions more times then he could count. Yet it had changed nothing. His dreams of experiencing the castle and having grand adventures had become just that, dreams.
He had once read a fairy tale where the young princess's beauty was ruled by the phases of the moon. As the moon waxed her beauty grew, to be revealed in full splendor when the moon reached its own fullness. As the moon waned, so did her beauty and health, until she was as a frail old woman. Awakening only at night, the princess lived her life under the watchful and controlling gaze of the moon, until the night came when the curse was lifted by the kiss of a prince.
The parchment crackled in the breeze, the neat letters wavering in his vision. He didn't believe in dreams coming true, not anymore, not for him; that was for the realm of fairy tales, not real life. There was nothing that would lift the moon's curse from him. He would live under its control for the rest of his life. But maybe… He straightened the parchment once more, reading the words again. Maybe that wasn't the dream that needed to come true.
In the fairy tale, it was the prince's compassion and love of the old woman that lifted the curse, his acceptance of her at her worst. If he could be accepted for who he was, as the letter suggested he might be, that could be enough. It wouldn't take away the pain of the transformation, but it might make it bearable; just as his parent's love had allowed him to forget, at times, the moon's control over him.
He allowed a small smile to escape, a spark of excitement lighting his eyes. Maybe those dreams weren't as impossible as he thought. He might yet experience all those adventures his young mind had conjured. The small smile became a grin as he remembered. Carefully folding the parchment, the boy jumped up and started running, disturbing the birds who had forgotten his presence in his stillness.
AUTHOR’S NOTES:
[1] I imagine Remus being about four or five when he was bitten. Having watched nieces and nephews growing up, I have a new understanding (and sometime awe) concerning the intelligence and imagination of children that age.
[2] The fairy tale Remus refers to is “Little Daylight” by George MacDonald. It is a version of Sleeping Beauty.

Saturday, August 20, 2011

HP FICTION: New Glasses

By Aelthwyn

Author's Note: This is my first ever fan-fiction. It's based on JK Rowling's characters James, Sirius, Remus, Peter, and Lily from the Harry Potter universe. Just a little scene I imagined of a fun day in the life of the Marauders :) I hope I have done them justice.
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James squinted at The Daily Prophet over his morning toast.
"Anything interesting?" Sirius asked squishing onto the bench next to him.
"If someone would care to hand over my glasses maybe I could tell." James's tone sounded distracted as if engrossed in one of the columns.
Sirius snatched it from his hands, trailing it in the butter. "Well maybe I'd better read it to you then." He said genially, clearing his throat in preparation and perusing for a choice headline. James glared at him.
"What!" Sirius did his best 'I'm innocent' expression. "You must admit my version of Hogwarts a History last night was much more entertaining anyways."
Remus smirked. Peter grinned. James glared on icily.
Sirius' smile fell and he went on in earnest. "James I swear I didn't hide them! I told you last night!"
"After leading me to believe you had turned them into a glass and I'd spent hours when I could have been writing that essay helping the house elves wash up and attempting to un-transfigure all those glasses!"
"It's not my fault if you're gullible and paranoid of your own friends."
Peter snorted at this suggestion.
Meanwhile Remus had rescued the newspaper from Sirius' wrinkling grasp, smoothed it out, and wiped the butter off the Minister for Magic's nose on the back of the front page. He regarded Sirius with a rather sinister proffessorly look over his cup of tea.
Sirius let out an exasperated sigh and magicked a quill to write something on his napkin. "I say, you're rather perfecting that Moony, someday they might just have to make you a Prof." He tossed the napkin across at him. Remus glanced down.
I will not hide James' glasses.
I will not hide James' glasses.
I will not hide James' glasses.
He tossed it back at him with a laugh.
Just then a late owl swooped in from above and dropped something in James' lap. "Anyway, I won't be needing anyone to read to me today, no thanks to you lot." He unwrapped the little package. "I ordered a new pair." He explained pulling out a shiny pair of spectacles. They were sort of… rectangular this time, and they all stared at him awkwardly for a moment taking in his new look.
"Well I can see what you think." James sniffed. "So spare me your remarks. I just thought I'd try something different." He finished loftily. Remus handed back his paper to which he pointedly turned his attention.
Remus glanced at Sirius. Sirius glanced at Peter. Peter glanced at James and then back at Sirius who muttered something (James was ignoring them), while surreptitiously flicking his wand behind the convenient screen of the Prophet. A moment later they were all choking down laughter.
James stood with a feigned expression of indignation. "Fine friends you are." He declared turning to go, but ran into Lily just coming to join them.
"Oh! James, they came!" She smiled a little too brightly as Peter shook his head vigorously behind James' back.
"Good morning Lily. What do you think?" He asked.
"Well…," she turn his head from side to side as if inspecting them. "They'll take some getting used to, but….. I think they really suit you." She replied ducking behind him to slide into the spot he had just vacated.
"Well at least someone likes them." James said to his three friends. "And if you think they're so awful, perhaps you'll consider giving back my old ones. Anyway, I'm going to go finish that essay somewhere without you three sniggering at me." He fixed them with a stare over his new glasses, not quite as successful as Remus' and strode away to a splutter of laughter.
"Hey James! Nice glasses." They heard someone call from further down the table as he passed.
"You know I think he might have got those ones just to annoy us," said Remus.
"Or else he intends to impersonate McGonnegal." Peter giggled.
"Not in those!" Sirius grinned madly.
"Those can't be the ones he ordered." Lily cut in.
"No no." Sirius assured her. "They were rectangular." Another bout of sniggers possessed Peter.
"He did tell us he wanted to try something different." Remus' eyes glittered in amusement. "Thanks for playing along, you were perfect."
"Honestly, the four of you!" Lily exclaimed, though she couldn't help giggling herself. "You know he'll get you all back for this, and I'd rather not be included."
"Oh don't go fix them yet!" Peter begged as she looked about to go after James, but he was already out the door, so she gave up and took the plate Sirius had just served up for her.
"We really are going to have to get the old ones back now though." Said Sirius, "And I Didn't take them!"
"I suppose it must have been….." Peter stopped. "Well, he lost them sometime on Friday right?"
Remus shot him a knowing glance. "Yes, we'll have to do a thorough search, later."
"I suppose I could go sniff around….." Sirius began.
"No I will." Peter cut in. "We've got potions with Slytherin today and I'd rather miss it."
Lily gave him reproving glance, mixed with sympathy.
"All right, if you can't root them out we'll put our heads together again before dinner." Remus nodded to them.
"Well I don't know what you two are still sitting around here for, but I'm not going to miss the fun!" Sirius said getting up to head after James with a pile of toast in his hand. "Pardon us Lily." He bowed gallantly at her with a wicked grin on his face and the other two rose to follow him with nods and smiles wishing her a good morning.
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"We should make the map show things as well as people." Peter whispered to Remus as they exited the great hall.
"Yes but which things?" Remus replied, "There'd be too many among all the quills and fizzing whizbees in people's pockets."
"Oh."
Sirius was munching distractedly at his toast and craning his neck for their quarry. He tapped their shoulders before pointing at the door to the library.
James was just emerging, still apparently oblivious to the Hot Pink-Rhinestoned-Cats-Eye glasses perched upon his nose. All three nearly doubled over laughing and ducked behind a pillar as James turned their direction. The hall was starting to get thick with people heading toward their first classes and they watched as people gaped and prodded each other as James passed. Several more people 'complimented' James on his glasses with dubious expressions before he began glancing around suspiciously. Then a group of Slytherins suddenly barred his way, and Sirius nudged the others to sneak 'round and back him up.
"Nice specs, Potter!" one of them sneered.
"Why thank you." He replied with sarcastically sunny politeness, just to spite them.
"Going to start a girl's band?" another laughed.
His smile froze and he reached up suspiciously. Just then plastic flowers sprouted from the corners of his glasses and squirted the lot of them as Sirius and Remus appeared at each of his shoulders for the face off. In the cries and commotion that followed there was a sudden flash and several people tripped over someone who must have slipped in the puddle.
"Great look, Flower Pot!" one who hadn't gotten wet called as the Slytherins broke up in a mixture of curses and hysterics.
"Thanks, Pal." James said through gritted teeth shoving the ridiculous glasses at Sirius as he watched them depart. Sirius put them on and beamed 'round at them. They all burst into laughter clutching each other as they staggered down the hall.
Sirius reached for the classroom door, apparently with every intention of wearing them inside.
"Wait! Give them here!" James grabbed them. On the backside they did look vaguely rectangular and innocently black, so he didn't feel too bad about not realizing sooner. "All right change them back" he prodded Sirius.
"You wanted something different!" he insisted still laughing. "Anyway, serves you right for not believing your best friend!"
"All right, all right, I'm sorry." James said grinning and shaking his head.
"Serves him right for intending to annoy us with them too." Remus put in.
Sirius made an exaggerated mournful sigh as he halfheartedly raised his wand at the glasses.
"Don't worry Sirius" Peter whispered loud enough for James to hear "I got a picture."
James made a pretend clout at Peter's head and fixed the glasses himself. "Come on!" he said grabbing Peter and Sirius by the sleeves as Remus opened the door. He shot a wink at Remus, as he pushed Sirius in before him and muttered something behind his back. Sirius' eyebrows sprouted into one thick bushy mass as he slipped into his customary seat at the back of class. "How long till someone notices?" James whispered, grinning at Remus who slipped in quietly after them.
"Well Binns certainly won't" Remus muttered, with a light in his eye that bet James it would last till next class.
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"I don't know. I think I rather like them." James said looking at himself in the bathroom mirror later that afternoon.
Sirius snorted catching sight of his enormous unibrow which he'd been pretending not to notice all day, forcing the others to keep having to stifle fits of laughter during class.
"You can't be serious James. It's like, changing your nose or something!" he exclaimed indignantly.
"You just don't look like you." Peter said.
"People change their glasses all the time. You just have to get used to it." James replied. "I think they make me look more calculating, don't you think?" he tried out a glare over the top of the narrow flat rims.
"I don't know. I think I rather like this." Sirius threatened, mimicking James' inspection of himself.
"You wouldn't!" James and Peter both cried.
"Oh I'm sure he would." Said Remus dryly. He leaned on James' shoulder to get into the mirror frame along with them so he could stare at James pointedly in it "But if you insist on keeping these, I think one of us will have to actually confiscate them."
They stared at themselves, the four of them, for a moment and then broke into laughter again as Sirius made faces in the mirror, doing his best to imitate gorillas and trolls.
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"Why don't you just enchant them to look like your old ones?" Lily suggested over dinner that evening. "Not that these are bad, but, you know…"
"Oh, now it's a matter of principle." Remus explained, talking as if James wasn't there. "I'm sure he will eventually if we stop bugging him about it."
James gave a sort of noncommittal nod.
"Anyway, sorry about this morning, James." She said as she got up to leave, her eyes lit with the amusing memory.
"Don't apologize!" Sirius cried, "Old 'Flower Pot' here deserved every minute of that and you know it."
James laughed along with them, "That really was a brilliant touch. Totally caught me off guard when I started squirting them!" He grinned broadly.
"I wish you'd gotten a picture of their faces!" Sirius laughed.
"Well I would have if I hadn't been trodden on." Peter grumbled good-naturedly.
"I think Peter deserves a reward for braving the enemy ranks in this escapade" Remus clapped his arm round Peter's shoulder. "How about repaying him those sugar quills you owe him James?"
"What! Reward him for taking that picture!"
"It has been over a month you've owed me!" Peter piped up on cue.
"Oh….well all right." James relented as they all got up from the table.
"Meet you back in Gryffindor Tower." He waved them on as he turned to head toward the one-eyed-witch.
"Where are you going?" Lily asked confused.
"Uh…..Secret stash." James glanced furtively at the others.
"Top secret" Sirius added darkly, steering Lily back to the tower with them.
Five minutes later James dropped carefully to the ground of the passage to Honeydukes and saw glowing in the darkness his old round-rimed glasses, now enchanted to shine in rainbow color sitting atop a large bag of sweets. So that's where Peter was during Potions today! He must have scoured the grounds for them that afternoon. James inspected the bag. By the number of pepper-imps he figured Sirius must have sent him with a special order, and a donation, probably from James' wallet, for the sugar quills while he was at it. He grinned, pocketed the bag and switched his glasses before hurrying back after his friends.

Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Dumbledore's Orders

“Now I have work for each of you. Fudge’s attitude, thought not unexpected, changes everything. Sirius, I need you to set off at once. You are to alert Remus Lupin, Arabella Figg, Mundungus Fletcher - the old crowd. Lie low at Lupin’s for a while; I will contact you there.”
— Dumbledore, end up book 4.

I’m going to take a leap and suggest that Dumbledore was so flustered by his encounter with Fudge that he wasn’t thinking straight. That can be the only explanation behind the orders he gave Sirius. Sirius, who was a member of the ‘old crowd’, who was thought to have vilely betrayed them and the Potters, and who was considered a murder, now on the run from the Ministry after breaking out of prison. Yes, Sirius is the perfect person to regather the Order of the Phoenix. What was Dumbledore thinking?!?!?!

A much more rational take on the orders would be for Sirius to alert Remus and have Remus gather the others. Sirius should probably not be approaching former enemies of Voldemort until such a time as Dumbledore can confirm his trustworthiness.

To Be Continued…

Friday, August 12, 2011

Sirius Black's Character

Author's comments:

J. K. Rowling has said that she likes Sirius as a character, but she does not think he is "wholly wonderful":

"Sirius is very good at spouting bits of excellent personal philosophy, but he does not always live up to them. For instance, he says in "Goblet of Fire" that if you want to know what a man is really like, 'look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.' But Sirius loathes Kreacher, the house-elf he has inherited, and treats him with nothing but contempt. Similarly, Sirius claims that nobody is wholly good or wholly evil, and yet the way he acts towards Snape suggests that he cannot conceive of any latent good qualities there...Sirius' great redeeming quality is how much affection he is capable of feeling. He loved James like a brother and he went on to transfer that attachment to Harry."

Rowling also described Sirius as a "bit of a loose cannon" and a "case of arrested development" and once described Sirius as "brave, loyal, reckless, embittered and slightly unbalanced by his long stay in Azkaban."

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There are several points about her assessment that don’t add up for me, based on what I know of Sirius from Books 3 and 4.

The first point is that he “doesn’t always live up to” his “bits of excellent personal philosophy”. Her two examples of this are Kreacher and Snape… lets think about this for a min… Kreacher was utterly vile and I wanted to strangle him most of the time and Snape was heavily into the dark arts, even if he was against Voldemort. Not the best examples in the world, considering it would take a saint to get along with those two. Considering Sirius’ long history with both of them, it is only natural he doesn’t get along with them. They are not exactly innocent victims when it comes to their bad relationship (though that is a different subject).

The second point is her comment that he is a “case of arrested development” and “slightly unbalanced”. While I won’t argue that 11 years in the hell hole that is Azkaban wouldn’t leave someone unbalanced, I do argue that it left him immature. There is nothing about his actions in the 3rd and 4th books that even remotely imply this. In fact, he acted remarkable mature and sane considering what he had been through. As someone pointed out, after hunting Peter for nearly a year with murderous intent, he backed down easily at Harry’s request that Peter be turned over to the Dementors instead.

It is no secret that I think she butchered his character in the 5th book (along with several other characters). Not blatantly, but little things here and there that didn’t add up and ended up changing the feel of the character. I did not buy his family history, his relationship with his family, his relationship with Kreacher, his supposed bullying of Snape (implying Snape was a victim), nor how badly he handled being confined to his “old house”.

This is someone who befriended Remus and survived 11 years in what was effectively hell on earth, and it felt like she didn’t honor his character’s particular strengths and weaknesses. She used him to get across the points she wanted to and didn’t follow him where he would naturally go. The faults she gave him didn’t feel like the faults he would have. Not to say he didn’t have plenty of faults, but my impression of the character led me to expect different problems.

To summarize, I believe her comments that he is a “case of arrested development” and hypocritical to be inaccurate based on what I know of the character before book 5.

Now, to address the question of how I dare say something like this. Character often have a life of their own outside of the author’s mind. The author comes up with the concept but the characters are more than the author’s creation. In their own way, they are real people, though ultimately they aren’t of course. As such, it’s possible for an author to loose touch with their character, or misrepresent them, especially if the author is trying to accomplish something specific without regard of their character’s personality. This can include everything from unfitting character back story, family history, wrong personality, actions, attitudes and so forth. I have seen plenty of published authors admit this and have experienced it myself when developing my own characters. I can’t count the number of times I’ve tried to have a character be a certain way or do a certain thing because I wanted it, only to have them protest in their own way. It takes, as Moody would say, constant vigilance and an attitude of listening to the characters instead of dictating. I feel that JKR dictated (especially based on some comments of hers) and as a result, she lost touch with her characters and misrepresented them. It isn’t rare and it does happen. That is why I’m willing to say her characterization of Sirius in the 5th book felt wrong.